Thursday 17 January 2013

Responsive// Progress Crit

Presentation Boards: 




Top Questions to consider: 

1) Had the potential product range been fully exploited? 
2) Has the context of delivery been considered?
3) Has audience or gender been considered?
4) How much information is needed? 
5) Clarity of Presentation & Organisation.

Feedback to me:

Clarity of Concept:  4
Breadth of Ideas:  3
Appropriateness of Response:  4
Contextual Awareness:  4
Analysis/ Understanding of Audience: 5
Level of Innovation/ Originality:  4
Quality/ Clarity of Presentation:   4

Comments: The Big Sleep title needs more experimentation placement/ adjustment, contextual research is modern where the book cover design is not. More Contrast between sky line and buildings.

Clarity of Concept: 4
Breadth of Ideas:  2
Appropriateness of Response:  4
Contextual Awareness: 3
Analysis/ Understanding of Audience: 4
Level of Innovation/ Originality:  5
Quality/ Clarity of Presentation:  3


Comments: Re-think light shinning up, Should they shine down? 
Make main type the orange colour, maybe foil to stand out. 
Spelling on boards, good process though. Look into context, research. 
Like the darkness of background. Where are original mockups? Want to see development. 
Like the symbolism, well thought through.

WHAT YOU NEED FOR THIS TIME IN TWO WEEKS

  • MAKE A2 PRESENTATION BOARDS.
  • BRING EVERYTHING YOU HAVE DONE
  • MAKE BOOKMARK FOR THI BOOK
  • BOOK PRINT SLOT FOR NEXT WEDNESDAY.
  • FIND ANOTHER BREIF AND DO IT!

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