During my Critique it was mentioned that all my research and development made sense to WHO Jack is.
However, with out my reaserch to back it up; Joe said that it was unclear what my type was saying. She mentioned that it looked more like a Horror type.
-Make my type more like JACK, Make it more OBVIOUS.
"BE UNIQUE TO THE INDIVIDUAL"
-Play around with more graffiti fonts- Try and discover a more stereotypical and conventional type related to Grafitti. Something more BOLD
-Think about changing the SLIME to DIPPING PAINT.
-I have a week to make a more suitable typeface that will say more about Jack as an individual.
