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Feedback
Strengths
- Variety of nets used.
- Logo would be clear on packaging when nets are constructed
- Suitable placement of logo, clear and concise despite the change in sizes.
- Variation in background keeps each design distinct from others.
Areas for Improvement
- Nets could have been constructed.
- Stock used wouldn't be sustainable due to stock used
- The nets look like they are missing bits so they wouldn't have constructed anyway.
- Could try more adventurous things with logo and scale, maybe reversing colours.
- Might look better without black lines
- Logos would be clearer if lines stopped at edge of speech bubble.
This task and feedback has to be the worse I have probably ever experienced since my time on the course! After photographing my nets and scanning them in I became very unconfident with the whole process as the way I was doing them was never going to work. I decided to use the pen tool and when it came to printing the nets there way no way they would ever fold up and become a box. Crits were highly embarrassing and I have to say a few people on my table had a lack of respect for 'a failed project'. However! I look forward to the next time we have a brief on nets because I am going to be very committed to making them perfect.
Group Areas of Popularity
- Stock quality
- Craftsmanship
- Good range of nets, range of design
- Colour scheme
- Can you identify what the box is for?
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